| | Kakumei (A-Rank Kusarigama) | |
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Shinji
Posts : 27 Join date : 2018-03-18
| Subject: Kakumei (A-Rank Kusarigama) Tue Oct 16, 2018 2:33 pm | |
| Name: Kakumei Item Type: Kusarigama Rank: A-Rank Agility/Strength: Agility Price: 10k Ryo Appearance: (Not to scale) The chain is, in its normal state, about 3.5 meters long. The sickle is double edged, with the top blade being about 35 cm long, and the bottom being about 28 cm long. The weight is about 10 cm at its longest, and 6 cm at its widest, weighing about a pound. Not accurate to the image, on the bottom of the weight is simply a sharpened point, rather than the spherical shape the image sports. Ability: Kakumei's ability is simple. The user can manipulate the chain through the use of their chakra in many ways. They can make the material more dense as a means to increase its weight, they can lock the links of the chain together in order to straighten the chain and keep it straight, they can extend the chain by adding links, they can reinforce the weapon to make it stronger, they can alter the shape of the chain (in small ways - sharpening the outsides of the chain links, for example) and they can move it through the use of just their chakra. In a single sentence, the ability can be summarized as the following: the user can alter the physical properties of the weapon through the use of their chakra. Jutsu: - Spoiler:
Jutsu Name: Kakumei: Bullet Shot Rank: A Primary Skill: Agility-Type Weaponry Secondary Skill: N/A
(Weaponry) Weapon: Kakumei, this app
Focus: Speed when the weight is used to strike, power when the sickle is.
Duration: Instant Cooldown: Three Posts Description: This jutsu's effect is simple. Basically, the user stiffens the chain so that it cannot bend, and extends it, holding either the sickle or the weight of the weapon, for up to 50 meters, with the speed and power of the jutsu. If the user holds the sickle, striking with the weight, the technique has a speed focus. If the user holds the weight, striking with the sickle, the jutsu has a power focus.
Jutsu Name: Kakumei: Extend Rank: D Primary Skill: Agility-Type Weaponry Secondary Skill: N/A
(Weaponry) Weapon: Kakumei, this app
Focus: Balanced
Duration: Instant Cooldown: None Description: The user is able to extend the chain of Kakumei by up to 10 meters on a single cast, or shorten it by the same amount.
Jutsu Name: Kakumei: Momentum Shift Rank: C Primary Skill: Agility-Type Weaponry Secondary Skill: N/A
(Weaponry) Weapon: Kakumei, this app
Focus: Speed
Duration: Instant Cooldown: Once per post Description: The user of the jutsu can change the momentum of Kakumei mid swing, or give it momentum from a stand-still, in order to change the direction of a swing, or start a swing when they normally wouldn't be able to (in cases where Kakumei was blocked, hanging limply, caught, the chain has too much slack, etc). Speed of the swing cannot exceed the normal speed of the user.
Jutsu Name: Kakumei: Parry Rank: C-B Primary Skill: Agility-Type Weaponry Secondary Skill: N/A
(Weaponry) Weapon: Kakumei, this app
Focus: Power Duration: Instant Cooldown: Two Posts Description: This jutsu works on non-jutsu strikes, and reasonable melee or weapon jutsu. The user strengthens the chain to be resistant to jutsu of a power equal to or less than this jutsu's power. The user uses the chain to block an incoming strike, and, depending on the situation (or the user's will) either the weight or the sickle of Kakumei autonomously transfer the energy distributed through the strike against Kakumei as a strike of their own, striking at the victim with an enhanced strike that is the power of the jutsu or strike used on them, forcing the victim to either react quickly enough, or get hit.
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| | | Alwen
Posts : 6 Join date : 2018-10-13
| Subject: Re: Kakumei (A-Rank Kusarigama) Tue Oct 23, 2018 5:44 am | |
| First up, with the ability, I'd like to see a bit more details please. Specifically, how much heavier can the user make the weapon? How much lighter? How much longer? I'd like to see a limit to this beyond just imagination.
Bullet Shot: A couple of things. First, as this is an A rank weapon, I don't know if it can use S rank jutsu? Further, what is the "A-S" representative of? I don't see any difference in what the technique does between A and S. Furthermore, I'd like to see a speed of how fast the chain moves as a result of this technique.
Extend: This seems fine to me
Bullet Shot: Not sure why this is repeated?
Momentum Shift: So, what does this mean exactly? That you can stop or increase its speed mid swing? Is there a limit to this?
Parry: So, from my understanding, this is an automatic counter? I'd like to see a speed, or something pointing out that it isn't an automatic hit, otherwise I'm fine with this. | |
| | | Shinji
Posts : 27 Join date : 2018-03-18
| Subject: Re: Kakumei (A-Rank Kusarigama) Tue Oct 23, 2018 4:30 pm | |
| As far as the ability goes, they are meant to be sorta un-detailed, like this, because you can't do anything with the ability itself. Shinji cannot, for example, passively increase the weight of Kakumei, because it requires jutsu to use an ability - there aren't any passives. (This is in the item system.) Because of this, I think it is best that we go through the specific details (as in, how much longer, heavier, etc) in the jutsu themselves? Specifically because the numbers would change based on rank of jutsu and whatnot. Ability has been edited, however, to not be so lazily written.
Bullet Shot: It was an S-Rank weapon before I changed my mind, I just hadnt fixed that. Edited. Repeated because I goofed, and c/p over another jutsu which I now can't remember, so edited as well. The speed is just equal to the jutsu speed, which is detailed in the jutsu system.
Momentum Shift: Edited for clarity.
Parry: The speed here is also equal to jutsu speed, explained in the jutsu system. | |
| | | Alwen
Posts : 6 Join date : 2018-10-13
| Subject: Re: Kakumei (A-Rank Kusarigama) Thu Oct 25, 2018 4:08 pm | |
| - Shinji wrote:
- Name: Kakumei
Item Type: Kusarigama Rank: A-Rank Agility/Strength: Agility Price: 10k Ryo Appearance:
(Not to scale) The chain is, in its normal state, about 3.5 meters long. The sickle is double edged, with the top blade being about 35 cm long, and the bottom being about 28 cm long. The weight is about 10 cm at its longest, and 6 cm at its widest, weighing about a pound. Not accurate to the image, on the bottom of the weight is simply a sharpened point, rather than the spherical shape the image sports.
Ability: Kakumei's ability is simple. The user can manipulate the chain through the use of their chakra in many ways. They can make the material more dense as a means to increase its weight, they can lock the links of the chain together in order to straighten the chain and keep it straight, they can extend the chain by adding links, they can reinforce the weapon to make it stronger, they can alter the shape of the chain (in small ways - sharpening the outsides of the chain links, for example) and they can move it through the use of just their chakra. In a single sentence, the ability can be summarized as the following: the user can alter the physical properties of the weapon through the use of their chakra. Jutsu: - Spoiler:
Jutsu Name: Kakumei: Bullet Shot Rank: A Primary Skill: Agility-Type Weaponry Secondary Skill: N/A
(Weaponry) Weapon: Kakumei, this app
Focus: Speed when the weight is used to strike, power when the sickle is.
Duration: Instant Cooldown: Three Posts Description: This jutsu's effect is simple. Basically, the user stiffens the chain so that it cannot bend, and extends it, holding either the sickle or the weight of the weapon, for up to 50 meters, with the speed and power of the jutsu. If the user holds the sickle, striking with the weight, the technique has a speed focus. If the user holds the weight, striking with the sickle, the jutsu has a power focus.
Jutsu Name: Kakumei: Extend Rank: D Primary Skill: Agility-Type Weaponry Secondary Skill: N/A
(Weaponry) Weapon: Kakumei, this app
Focus: Balanced
Duration: Instant Cooldown: None Description: The user is able to extend the chain of Kakumei by up to 10 meters on a single cast, or shorten it by the same amount.
Jutsu Name: Kakumei: Momentum Shift Rank: C Primary Skill: Agility-Type Weaponry Secondary Skill: N/A
(Weaponry) Weapon: Kakumei, this app
Focus: Speed
Duration: Instant Cooldown: Once per post Description: The user of the jutsu can change the momentum of Kakumei mid swing, or give it momentum from a stand-still, in order to change the direction of a swing, or start a swing when they normally wouldn't be able to (in cases where Kakumei was blocked, hanging limply, caught, the chain has too much slack, etc). Speed of the swing cannot exceed the normal speed of the user.
Jutsu Name: Kakumei: Parry Rank: C-B Primary Skill: Agility-Type Weaponry Secondary Skill: N/A
(Weaponry) Weapon: Kakumei, this app
Focus: Power Duration: Instant Cooldown: Two Posts Description: This jutsu works on non-jutsu strikes, and reasonable melee or weapon jutsu. The user strengthens the chain to be resistant to jutsu of a power equal to or less than this jutsu's power. The user uses the chain to block an incoming strike, and, depending on the situation (or the user's will) either the weight or the sickle of Kakumei autonomously transfer the energy distributed through the strike against Kakumei as a strike of their own, striking at the victim with an enhanced strike that is the power of the jutsu or strike used on them, forcing the victim to either react quickly enough, or get hit.
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| | | Yoshie Ichizo
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